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Theme Entry: The Want of Tears by ~soul-perfume:iconsoul-perfume:





My heart hurts
its strings all tangled in knots
My heart hurts
Of love's loss in endless laugh
My heart aches
It's slit. It crumbles.

Of endless fervor
And want of tears
the heart screams

through sorrow of laughter
©2008 ~soul-perfume
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Full Title: The Want of Tears

Theme Submission By: ~KelFausto

Writer's Comments: A subdued point felt one night when i certainly yearned for it

Current Theme: Love


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~maslowmassacre:iconmaslowmassacre: Feb 20, 2008, 8:16:13 AM
heart-strings and headaches.

i think the cliche element to your work could be toned down.
poorly implemented originality is my only problem with this piece.

i like the format very much.

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a vision of balance and incontinuity.