My heart hurts
its strings all tangled in knots
My heart hurts
Of love's loss in endless laugh
My heart aches
It's slit. It crumbles.
Of endless fervor
And want of tears
the heart screams
through sorrow of laughter

My heart hurts its strings all tangled in knots My heart hurts Of love's loss in endless laugh My heart aches It's slit. It crumbles. Of endless fervor And want of tears the heart screams through sorrow of laughter |
Devious Comments
i think the cliche element to your work could be toned down.
poorly implemented originality is my only problem with this piece.
i like the format very much.
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a vision of balance and incontinuity.
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